FAIRYTALE FANTASY-
-ANVIKSHA SHRIWASTAVA
a fairy
enters my
dream
she holds
me in
her arms
and fills
me with
love
she whispers
to my heart
as if she
is a magician
and with
a wave of
her wand
she can
bring out
my confidence
like a rabbit
in a hat
she makes
me sparkle
as she
flutters
her way
to my
every need
she is
a fairy
who I
call
MOM
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9 comments:
bahut sunder Anviksha. aapki lekhani bahut sunder hai.yunhi likhati rahiye.May GOD bless you.
Love,
Amita aunty.
it is a beautiful poem , very well expressing the sentiments about mother comparing her to a fairy. in reality, to her children, mother is better than any imaginable good fairy.
may God bless you
Pushpa Mehra
परी जैसी बहुत सुंदर प्रस्तुति .
बहुत आशीर्वाद
soo beautiful .. god bless u .. :)keep writing
I would like to thank all of you who have commented on my poem I am very thankful that you have taken the time to help my confidence grow by encouraging me.
Anviksha
अन्वीक्षा, बहुत प्यारी कविता है...| लेखन के साथ ही जीवन के हर क्षेत्र में सफल होकर ख्होब नाम कमाओ, ऐसी ही शुभकामना है...| यूं ही लिखती रहो...|
प्रियंका गुप्ता
Anvi ....
aapne bahut sudnar kavita likhi hai ..... ham sabko garv hai ki aap abhi itni chhoti umr se itni sundar kavitayen likhti hain ... aise hi likhti rahiyega aur badi ho kar Maa ke jaisi achchhi lekhika ban jana ....
dher sare pyar evam asheesh ke sath
Manju mausi
Bahut sunder kavita hai
Your mother is very lucky to have a daughter like you
God Bless You
Bahu sunder kavita hai
God Bless You
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