Saturday, September 7, 2013

FAIRYTALE FANTASY ( 5th Sept-2013)

FAIRYTALE FANTASY-

-ANVIKSHA SHRIWASTAVA

a fairy

enters my 

dream

she holds 

me in

her arms

and fills

me with 

love

she whispers 

to my heart

as if she

is a magician

and  with

a wave of

her wand

she  can 

bring out 

my confidence

like a rabbit

in a hat

she  makes 

me sparkle

as she 

flutters

her way

to my

every need 

she is 

a fairy

who I 

call

MOM

 

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9 comments:

  1. bahut sunder Anviksha. aapki lekhani bahut sunder hai.yunhi likhati rahiye.May GOD bless you.
    Love,
    Amita aunty.

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  2. it is a beautiful poem , very well expressing the sentiments about mother comparing her to a fairy. in reality, to her children, mother is better than any imaginable good fairy.

    may God bless you

    Pushpa Mehra

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  3. मंजु गुप्ताSunday, 08 September, 2013

    परी जैसी बहुत सुंदर प्रस्तुति .

    बहुत आशीर्वाद

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  4. I would like to thank all of you who have commented on my poem I am very thankful that you have taken the time to help my confidence grow by encouraging me.

    Anviksha

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  5. अन्वीक्षा, बहुत प्यारी कविता है...| लेखन के साथ ही जीवन के हर क्षेत्र में सफल होकर ख्होब नाम कमाओ, ऐसी ही शुभकामना है...| यूं ही लिखती रहो...|

    प्रियंका गुप्ता

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  6. Anvi ....

    aapne bahut sudnar kavita likhi hai ..... ham sabko garv hai ki aap abhi itni chhoti umr se itni sundar kavitayen likhti hain ... aise hi likhti rahiyega aur badi ho kar Maa ke jaisi achchhi lekhika ban jana ....

    dher sare pyar evam asheesh ke sath
    Manju mausi

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  7. Bahut sunder kavita hai
    Your mother is very lucky to have a daughter like you
    God Bless You

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  8. Bahu sunder kavita hai
    God Bless You

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